Pages

Wednesday, May 5, 2021

My Responsible Re

 KIA Ora this week I have created a vine with some facts about Jesus of what he does and what the vine means. Everyone was doing different vines to make it different for everyone to see who is whose vine that they made by themselves about Jesus and God.

Here is my vine that I've created by myself talking about Jesus and God of what the vine means to us and to other people.



Have you ever made a vine?

5 comments:

  1. Hi Mila,
    great job on your vine and yes I have made a vine before and great job what is your favourite part of making your vine maybe next time you could do a bite more answers
    from kiriana

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hi Mila,
    I think you've done a really good job on your RE/Vine I like the colour of it but maybe have like one more colour and more shorter things then 3 big things but other then that you have done a good job.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi Mila,
    Its Sophie great job on your vine/RE also yes I have made a vine be for. I really liked the way you sketched it, it looks really good. I think instead of making three big things you could of made more small thing and put them in grapes.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Hi Mila
    I think you did a really good job on your work I think you could work on having a bit more words but it dose look so cool with the love heart
    Freya

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hi Mila,
    I think you did a really good job on your work. I really liked the way you sketched it, it looks really good. I think instead of making three big things you could of made more small thing and put them in grapes. I like the colour of it but maybe have like one more colour and more shorter things then 3 big things but other then that you have done a good job.

    Kiriana

    ReplyDelete

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post